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The slow build to a somber heart
Raining it was when she came to me
Blinded I was that I couldn't see
All the things in her eyes I can never be
I swallow pride and bite hard the lip
Trying not to let the wrong words slip
But sarcasm from her lips they did drip
Consequences and feelings were dished out on razors tongue
Slashing at the broken that I have become
And like dust in a hurricane, the damage was done
But I still love you
Raining it was when she came to me
Blinded I was that I couldn't see
All the things in her eyes I can never be
I swallow pride and bite hard the lip
Trying not to let the wrong words slip
But sarcasm from her lips they did drip
Consequences and feelings were dished out on razors tongue
Slashing at the broken that I have become
And like dust in a hurricane, the damage was done
But I still love you
Wrote this awhile back. It's not very good but I figure, what the hell.
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i really really like how you wrote this. the words, the wording, the whole composition and meaning.